All Comments on 'Things Need to Change Ch. 01'

This is a personal fantasy of mine. I wish my boyfriend would step up to the plate and put me on a leash. I just want a pretty collar gimme!

this is off to a great start. i like the characters and am turned on, i am interested to see how it progresses and what humiliating domination happens. maybe some cuckolding? lots of ways it can go. for now John at Becky's feet is a good start

She wants change? Then give her the divorce the bitch deserves. Arguing with an angry man at a traffic accident is a sure way to get injured or dead. Nobody is stupid enough to get into a fight over a damaged car. It's just a car. Given Becky's response and then her attitude he should have manned up. And either packed his stuff and left or thrown her out. What a ridiculous story line that any man would take her abusive crap for even two seconds. She's clearly out of control and needs help. Even for fiction this was just plain stupid.

i love it and hope you continue the story ,

looks like there is even potential with Linda

a gynarchy story ….

looking forward to the sequels ...

I love the build up so far. Can't wait to see where it goes next. Will she bully him too?

Original and realistic premise. Great touch with the purse! Hope to see more. Thanks for sharing!

Great stuff, purse a super touch, please continue!

Nice start.

Curious to see where she leads you.

Lose the "34D" breasts. You could say "full" or "generous" without giving cup size. Your punctuation needs a LOT of work.

Good start but there needs to be several more chapters to make this story complete.

Get writting man, I neeD more

As previously stated, "get writing man!". This has potential.

where is the other chapters?