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by Just_Jenna

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Erika281Erika281about 9 years ago

1. she should be more afraid

2. I like two endings

Overall, keep writting!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Woah! The alternate ending had me in shock. Keep writing, looking forward for more stories. Best of luck!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Didn't expect 2 endings

The first ending is the most likely/most obvious, but I have to admit, I liked ending #2 better. A nice twist to the tale - and I hope she finds "The Stranger".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
good start

Good first story.

hplitprincehplitprinceabout 9 years ago
Hot story!

Very sexy fantasy! Congrats on your first submission :-)

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