All Comments on 'Setting Up Cupid'

by JayDavid

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
nice tale

nice tale and good sex does not always mean a good match up for marriage.

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesabout 9 years ago
Don't Settle for One You Can Live WITH -

go with the one you can't live WITHOUT!!!

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
Many_Memories

nailed it.

Never Settle

for

Good Enough.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great story

You nailed it

artykay63artykay63about 9 years ago
liked it a lot

that is exactly what a short story should be.

sleepy34sleepy34about 9 years ago

Great Valentine's story. I Loved it.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 9 years ago
Cupid wins--Valentine wins

Hope you win, too. It's a great Valentine's Day story.

AMoveableBeastAMoveableBeastabout 9 years ago

Cute and cleverly done. This one is enchanting. Perfect for the contest. Well done.

jott50jott50about 9 years ago

nice romantic story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great Story!

Although the story is complete, this is one of those I would like to see go on!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Well. That is definitely a good story. 5 stars worthy, no doubt. Caught me by surprise, too. I was expecting Sasha to break up with Val so he and Sherry Wine could be together. I liked the author’s ending better than what I imagined, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Timeline ?

One evening in January .... It was fall, but still warm. All in one paragraph.

Was it January or was it fall?

JayDavidJayDavidover 3 years agoAuthor

Good catch on the timeline error. I've edited the story to fix it. Thanks!

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