All Comments on 'Thumbsucker'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Shrinking people is a thing that people fantasize about? Who knew?

Huh? Shrinking people? WTF this starts interestingly enough and the technical writing is good but then someone starts to shrink for no apparent reason. Whatever.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Amazing

A fantasy of mine is being shrunken and used but not swallowed :0 lol

Still an amazing story. More more more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
It's awesome!

I love this great job

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Stunning

An absolutely amazing story, just like your other stories. Well done and keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Not bad

But seems unfinished. "Swallows him hard"? That left me wondering whether she swallowed him into her stomach and digested him. Did she let him out later?

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