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guinneguinneabout 9 years ago
lovely

more, please!!

ianbabyyyianbabyyyabout 9 years agoAuthor
Part 2

Part 2 is pending! I'm sorry I didn't mention it would be multiple chapters, but it'll take a bit to build up. I promise more sexy things!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Aaack, crap!!! I'm so sorry!!!

I totally hit the wrong star button, and gave it a 1 instead of a 5. I really loved it, and hope you'll continue. This is VERY well written and almost completely free of errors. But more than that, your voice just leaps off the page! I promise I'll be more careful in my rating with the next chapter, just don't stop posting :(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I'm excited for part 2!

EiliTheFallenOneEiliTheFallenOneabout 9 years ago
love love love this!!!

It was very well written and already has me wet with anticipation. I will be impatiently awaiting additional parts keep up the good work. ^_^

Zenful_IntentionsZenful_Intentionsalmost 9 years ago
Great start

And I'm sure it'll just keep getting hotter...

Prince_of_ThievesPrince_of_Thievesover 8 years ago
Very rich and vivid !

A very intriguing start to what seems to be a rather unique story. The writer's ability to transport the reader smack dab into the middle of the action is unsurpassed ! Can't wait to read more !

Cindy1001Cindy1001about 8 years ago
Lovely in a strange way

And it has potential. I'll keep an eye open for the sequels.

CuriousAndCenteredCuriousAndCenteredabout 8 years ago
Well done kit!

Pain isn't really my thing, but Alanna's submission was very hot. Beautifully written!

MastersWenchMastersWenchalmost 8 years ago
Yummy

Great start to this story! It leaves me hungry for more...

xx

AfterDuskAfterDuskover 5 years ago

An interesting start and a good set up! I appreciate where you chose to start, throwing us right into the middle of it, that way we can get to know the main character at the same time as the others.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Awesome! Interested to see where this goes

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Hey, I'm ian. Writer, singer, tree climber, dirty mouthed, sexy, fierce, enbie bunny. I try to write as often as possible, but sadly my depression makes things difficult. I'm just starting to spread my writing out to other sites, hoping to keep myself focused with more readers...

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