All Comments on 'I Am Jack's Life Ch. 02'

Getting good with passing chapters. Hope to read it all in once without waiting for lit to update chapters.

Getting really good. Like the other guy said lit needs to hurry it up

It is difficult to critique a chapter unless you know how it fits with the entire story. This reads really well. Obviously if it stopped here it would be a great disappointment. So whatever this is leading up to, this chapter continues from the first to build suspense and interest. But seriously, you already know that! Feel kind of lame even commenting, but you deserve to hear how good this is. I hope I can continue to cheer your future chapters.

Anyone interested in providing a detailed review or critique without waiting for Lit to finish posting the series should read this forum post:

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1146071

Bought the Kindle on Amazons web site. Loved it.

and it is starting out very slow.

We are being involved smoothly with the central character and there is a lot of mystery as to where it is going.