All Comments on 'My Accident Ch. 01'

I really enjoyed that :D

good but you need a dictionary or a good editor a lot of wrong words trying to read it gave me a headache

SPELLING.........................

That gazzing thing willl do it every time.

I loved it. I'm going on to part II. You might want to get a spell checker for your 'puter. But other than that, you were quite creative. Very good dialogue, so far.

loved it, loved it, loved it!

Stop trying to write. You need to learn basic English.

Write in your native language, which obviously is not English.

Never mind the naysayers who criticize your grammar, how many stories have they written?

I loved it to.

i liked the way this story read a lot. thanks

Shame you can't spell - gazzing ?? No wonder she was wet if you filled her with gaz !

Could be dangerous ! She could go off with a bing !!

More more more more!

can't wait to see the follow up.

How dare you. It is all right that you really fucked your mom. But how dare you make a mistake on spelling gazzing wrong. Dont you know you are supposed to be as perfect as God. Im just kidding. Im pointing out that the frigging grammar freaks can all go straight to

My Accident chapter 1 is a very good read. I will read it again. Keep up the good work.

I enjoyed reading your story. Yes, there are some grammar problems and spelling issues, but since your first language is German I think most of us need to consider your writing in a second language.

I know it would destroy the plot, but it would seem to me that it would've been easier just to sit down on the toilet and urinate. If you have an erection, your mom could hold the erection down so that it doesn't spill all over the floor.

Sounds logical....well do us all a favor and try it! And as for peeing ....any idiot would know ....you sit down on the toilet and then have a piss! Is that too hard to fathom?

THAT is a Great story!!!

I could read that story every day!

Thank you.