All Comments on 'Unadulterated Lust'

by Tangoracer

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good one.

Well-constructed story.

Love the guys love-making. And his panache and humour. And the sheer coo bravadol on the morning after as he passes 'hubby' in the street as he exits the building. 5*

jingerbirdjingerbirdabout 9 years ago
Hmmmmmm

Loved the story. Would love to know what the Husband said about the imprint on the window.

The sex scenes were hot, well written and credible. I enjoyed it very much.

BrandybeebeeBrandybeebeeabout 9 years ago
Naughty, naughty lol

Loved this story, it was so realistic. I can see this happening any weekend in a busy city. Whilst the cats a way, the mouse will play lol.

Enjoyed the story, well written and naughty - the shag at the window, anal, the quip tata to the concierge and the cheeky getaway, just in time, using the husband's cab.

Hope you write more. 5 from me.

Stone_RhineStone_Rhineabout 9 years ago
Well Done

Enjoyed your first story very much. It was believable, erotic and very heated. Your lead character is very well portrayed as a bit of a naughty lad. A very good read and well written.

Jayc57Jayc57about 9 years ago
i enjoyed it

Interesting and erotic, well written, hope to see more.

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