All Comments on 'Twin Haiku'

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tazz317 about 9 years ago

KISSING A RELATIVE---NON SEXUAL

the stiffening occurs because it is. TK U MLJ LV NV

Anonymousabout 9 years ago

Read the author's bio.

It's about a brother/sister relationship.

eidetic about 7 years ago

difficult

Haiku is a difficult form, requiring exactly 17 syllables.

You have executed it well and in English no less.

Thank you.

MDG1969 about 7 years ago

Wow

Just - Wow!

Kousakacomplex almost 7 years ago

You two inspired me

Under nights shadow,

You slipped by my side to kiss

my forbidden lips.

AngusStewart over 5 years ago

Fun Read

I enjoyed it. It teases my imagination.

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