All Comments on 'Changes Ch. 02'

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luvv2culuvv2cuabout 18 years ago
Wonderful

Quite wonderful. I have read the first two parts of your story with growing delight. The air of mystery about her master, coupled with the fact that she has yet to still see him, in spite of two sexual meetings, only adds to the delicate but interesting build up. I love the fact that it is a Victorian house, allowing us to savour the strict atmosphere of a bygone era that is so full of sexual undertones. Keep up the good work...I look forward to part 3 which I will be reading very shortly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
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another cocksucking WIMP posting dumb cuck SHIT.

liz33ndliz33ndover 5 years ago
Wonderful part two

I think I know where this is going. But so wonderful. I am so short of breathe.

mactsomactsoover 2 years ago

Kinda of hoping it doesn't go the cliche route and it turns out the husband is behind all this.

Be nice if she just realizes he's not for her and they go their separate ways.

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