A very good illustration of a really mind-bending fuck and one of the dip and go kind. A disinterested dick in an equally disinterested pussy is like jacking off in your shoe. I prefer the other kind...DUH! Very hot story.
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Anonymous09/12/05
romance
Too often ponography has no romance. This story had romance in even proportions to the lust. For thinking "outside the box" in this genre, I thank you.
The sensitivity of this story is touching to say the least! Well written and romantic as well as lustful. I don't know if this was based on an acutal event or not but if it was, then I have only kudos for the son (writer) giving the his mother the love she so deeply needed and deserved.
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Anonymous06/01/06
Fucked my mom
Great story. I started fucking my mom when I was 14. I fucked my mom for 4 years after my dad was killed in an accident. She also fucked many men. I would fuck her after she came home after fucking some man.
I would eat her freshly fucked pussy while she told me about her date. My mom was my whore.
Mom remarried and we quit fucking. I miss fucking mom. She was a great fuck. She loved to suck my cock.
Was fine until the so called yelling and screaming? No one sleeps so soundly that they would sleep thru yelling and screaming from the next room. That is absolute B/S. The premise is that you would be as quiet as possible under the circumstances. Even tho it is fiction, the reader must be left with the impression that it was entirely possible,and therefore , believable. As I said before, it was fine until the yelling and screaming,then you lost me as to the believability of the scene. Just my thoughts.
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Anonymous06/23/09
Bit of a reply for clifton1042
You say no one could sleep through that? You haven't met my husband or boyfriend... They both can sleep though my self induced orgasms, and I'm not quiet.... Some people actually are that Oblivious...
As for the story, omg.... VERY hot... I never had a thing for my parents, but my sister or my male cousin.... Sometimes a new perspective can see the truth of things, as this story shows... Very romantic, very sensual, very hawt... Just what I needed on a lonely night...
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Anonymous07/02/10
It was a quickie.
Great writing. 4 stars for being too short.
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Anonymous02/26/11
way short
good story but shortn hottt
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Anonymous03/24/12
Very Beautiful
This style of story has huge potential. This is just the opening for a much longer, even more beautiful story. Xyster, please write that expanded story. Let's all know what happens between this person and his Mother.
ONE OF THE BETTER ONES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS STORY HAD IT ALL,WRITTEN PROPERLY . AND SHOWED THE LOVE THAT COULD HAPPEN WHEN YOU LEAST EXCEPT IT. PLEASE GIVE US MORE LIKE THIS... A FAN................LAROC OF AGES
English
sexy
it was a sexy story
Great
This story is well writen and very sensitive. Hot too!
eyes crossed
A very good illustration of a really mind-bending fuck and one of the dip and go kind. A disinterested dick in an equally disinterested pussy is like jacking off in your shoe. I prefer the other kind...DUH! Very hot story.
romance
Too often ponography has no romance. This story had romance in even proportions to the lust. For thinking "outside the box" in this genre, I thank you.
For the love of a mother
The sensitivity of this story is touching to say the least! Well written and romantic as well as lustful. I don't know if this was based on an acutal event or not but if it was, then I have only kudos for the son (writer) giving the his mother the love she so deeply needed and deserved.
Fucked my mom
Great story. I started fucking my mom when I was 14. I fucked my mom for 4 years after my dad was killed in an accident. She also fucked many men. I would fuck her after she came home after fucking some man.
I would eat her freshly fucked pussy while she told me about her date. My mom was my whore.
Mom remarried and we quit fucking. I miss fucking mom. She was a great fuck. She loved to suck my cock.
Cool
Short sweet one this time. Nice.
Was fine,until
Was fine until the so called yelling and screaming? No one sleeps so soundly that they would sleep thru yelling and screaming from the next room. That is absolute B/S. The premise is that you would be as quiet as possible under the circumstances. Even tho it is fiction, the reader must be left with the impression that it was entirely possible,and therefore , believable. As I said before, it was fine until the yelling and screaming,then you lost me as to the believability of the scene. Just my thoughts.
Bit of a reply for clifton1042
You say no one could sleep through that? You haven't met my husband or boyfriend... They both can sleep though my self induced orgasms, and I'm not quiet.... Some people actually are that Oblivious...
As for the story, omg.... VERY hot... I never had a thing for my parents, but my sister or my male cousin.... Sometimes a new perspective can see the truth of things, as this story shows... Very romantic, very sensual, very hawt... Just what I needed on a lonely night...
It was a quickie.
Great writing. 4 stars for being too short.
way short
good story but shortn hottt
Very Beautiful
This style of story has huge potential. This is just the opening for a much longer, even more beautiful story. Xyster, please write that expanded story. Let's all know what happens between this person and his Mother.
ONE OF THE BETTER ONES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS STORY HAD IT ALL,WRITTEN PROPERLY . AND SHOWED THE LOVE THAT COULD HAPPEN WHEN YOU LEAST EXCEPT IT. PLEASE GIVE US MORE LIKE THIS... A FAN................LAROC OF AGES
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