All Comments on 'The Camping Trip Ch. 01'

If she gets preggie, lets have a continuation on this erotic fantasy story....

That Jake fucks her and she thereby does not wake up is very improbable. Although she is drunk, it's in this case overdone.

Otherwise well Story. Thanks for good entertainment.

It's a rape story, so it should be in "nc/r".

When I got there and found that the other wives copped out then that would have been it. I would have taken the wife back home and let the rapist get mad. But then I'm not a dumb ass closet freak that really wants to suck his friends cocks.

my thinking is that she wanted to get preg and pretended to sleep through it all. And her hubby, with his vasectomy, isn't quite smart enough to realize it. A fun camping fuck.

more poor grammar. think or thing. Highly improbable plot, full of holes. Why didn't she just go back home in their car? Oh, was it because it had the beer?

ever had sex? you do know that people don't sleep thru getting raped right?? seriously, if you don't know anything about sex, please don't post here.

Most people don't honestly care whether it is possible to fuck someone without them waking up. It is actually plausible and an extremely well written story.

Only an idiot could have written this ridiculous, implausable story

Wow, that was some pretty harsh criticism! It's fiction boys! Geez. Personally I thought it was a really horny story. Makes me wonder about sharing a tent with hubby's friends next time! heehee. You know, combining #1 and #2 would be a good idea... avoids the intermission.

I stopped reading and gave this crap 1 star.

I don't mean issues, because issues are minor. I mean full blown danger to yourself should be locked up and forced into therapy emotional problems.

but a hot little fantasy. If the naughty gorgeous muse Catherine likes it there's an extra horny dimension.

Wow I've read some pretty crappy stories on this site but I think this one takes the cake.

There was clearly NO WAY your wife was not aware about whose cock was in her. She thoroughly enjoyed it. I can only surmise that this led to further adventures. I, and others, would like to read all about them. Private EMail already sent to you.

that was so hot but I think your wife new it wasn't you fucking her.

if it was my wife I would let them fuck her all night sense she new it.

hell yes if it was my wife both the guys could have fucked her specially as she was awake

cuck shit.

Whereas the story is just shy of being 100% realistic,

it DEFINITELY is 100% EROTIC.

The moment when the wife winks at her husband is

PRICELESS!

As I said in the subject line, the wife is a keeper!

I wish she were my wife.

Campgrounds are magical places where a mysterious positive energy permeates everything including campers minds & bodies!

BTW, my wife & i have been together for 40 years now. & I've been a voyeur husband for the last 30 years! Nothing like this ever happened... except that for a period of 10 years men were attracted to her like flies to shit (at the time, she was 35 to 45; most men were younger than her!)

i know how lucky you are mate.

I share my wife with all my mates and when I get her home she's so worked up she's all over me.

If she's available I'd love to give her a good f**king.

Even more ridiculous than most of your cuck centric writing Little Sweete.

Anyone who thinks this was hot obviously lives in the closet with there blowup doll.

I agree with anon 09/06/18 (BRAVO@...)

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"Campgrounds are magical places where a mysterious positive energy permeates everything including campers' minds & bodies!"

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she would have slept thru all that action and sure enough he saw her eyes open and she smiled . Clearly she was aware of what happened and it wasn't her husband who creamed her . She wants to get even with her two girlfriends for backing out on the trip and leaving her alone with 3 men . Her husband should return to the tent , roll her onto her back and eat her pussy until she is begging him to stop . Then he should fuck her silly before going and getting Jake to use his oversize equipment on her . Just to even things up ! LOL

I agree with Sandman_truck, NO WAY, she slept through a Jake's meaningful penetration...but still a fun story. Camping can bring out some of the most unexpected happenings...use your imagination, it doesn't have to happen, just close your eyes and smile.

:)

Excellent, 💯%!

In my book this wife sex story is very very erotic. 5.0 = 💯% = ★★★★★!

There should be a warning when serialized stories end before there is an ending.

There is no ending to this story.

The plot is almost inexistent. The husband isn't stupid he is worst than stupid. Whatever happens to such a character he just deserve it.