All Comments on 'The Tides Of War Pt. 05'

by RobinLane

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Sid0604Sid0604about 9 years ago
Another great chapter...

Thank you for another great chapter. It's easily worth 5 stars and I'm looking forward to reading the coming chapters.

teedeedubteedeedubabout 9 years ago
agreed

I really like this story so far. Great detail, fascinating story line. Can't wait for Pt. 6.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More please

It seems you have this one plotted out, but stretch it out if you can.......one of those stories I don't want to end. I think I'll reread Rudyard Kipling's "Kim" while I wait for the next chapter.

tazz317tazz317about 9 years ago
IN EACH AND EVERY SPRING ARRIVAL

the people involved become infatuated. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Like it a lot

Great story well laid out, plenty detail without over doing it. Cant wait for next chapter with plenty little twists and turns I hope. Keep it up!

AlunCarregTheWelshmanAlunCarregTheWelshmanabout 9 years ago
great story line BUT

further to the comment '' i'll read kim'' , i'm what you call a book worm and have dozens of authors on literotica so i'll have to start '' war and peace'' by tolstoy, great .great keep going till 1914 only 25 years alun

dinkymacdinkymacabout 9 years ago
Excellent read!

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

There is a serious problem with Pt. 05....... there are only three pages to it.

shopdogshopdogabout 9 years ago
And again.

So I noticed Pt. 1 reappeared so I just read the entire story again straight through. Yea, it needs editing for grammar and punctuation. But I prefer receiving the next part AS SOON AS POSSIBLE PLEASE. Worse than being called away from a good book because I don't know when I'll get more.

grindher63grindher63about 9 years ago

when will we see parts 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, a very good read keep on writing

arrowglassarrowglassabout 9 years ago
Excellent story!!!!!

I have just finished Pt. 1 thru 5...could not put it down...anxiously awaiting 6

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Excellent

Thank you for the editing, I am sure I skipped your first offering due to grammar and spelling. Parts 1 and 5 are very readable. I did manage the other parts after getting hooked by the new part1

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Really, it is a great story, very well crafted. Thank You . . .,

for no cuckoldry. Thank You for people of honor, integrity, intelligence, and responsibility. Thank you for genuine love and passion, and the integrity and maturity with which it is enjoyed. Thank you for the drama and excitement of a foreign land and culture. Thank you for a woman of passion and lust, who yet has the intelligence and discipline to engage her lover with a depth of emotion and thoughtfulness that presumes a connection of minds as well as bodies. Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
POSH

You put her on the wrong side. Port out Starboard home. Too hot on other side. Love the story.

Dougrob0121Dougrob0121about 5 years ago
POSH

Hi Robin. I see at the start of ch 19 David recommends a starboard cabin on the steamer journey out to India. The best cabins were Port Out Starboard Home. The origin of the word posh

Really like the story, an unusual setting,time and place. Characters well portrayed

Cheers

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