All Comments on 'What Dreams May Come'

very well written story, I laughed , cried, and got aroused. Your detail was out of this world. I am glad I took the time this morning to look at the new stories and find yours... I am a happy lady today.... Keep up the great writing....

very well written story, I laughed , cried, and got aroused. Your detail was out of this world. I am glad I took the time this morning to look at the new stories and find yours... I am a happy lady today.... Keep up the great writing....

I havent read an erotic short story in five years and it was great to come across this one! Very well written, I almost wish there was a part two!

One of the best stories I have ever read in the pages of Literotica.

The plot is well thought out and the erotic scenes are not onlly nicely described, but fit very natuarally in the story line. There is no sex simply for the sake of stimulating the reader although that is the inevitable--and pleasant--result.

All in all a most excellent story which merits more than the maximum 5 star vote I can give it.

I am a man in his late 50's who lost his wife of almost 23 years about two years ago. I have recently begun a romantic and very passionate relationship with Sarah, a beautiful woman in her early 30's whose oral skills are almost exactly as described. I don't know if my deceased wife is pulling the strings or not, and some of the details are different....but for me, this is a work of non-fiction. Uncanny!

Great story, loved it.

After the plane crash, it should read the families of the dead gathered, as there were no survivors.

Well written, looking forward to more.

.....but I sure loved this one. I have no idea what possessed me to read it in the first place, but I am so pleased to have been directed to this and I will now read all your stories.

Thank you.

You build beautiful worlds with wonderful loving people. Please write some longer stories.

Thank you! OMG I actually cried at the ending...lol

It's like a script from the movie, only it made me sooo wet and wanted my 50 yr old guy neighbor so bad. I am 30 yrs old woman btw. We had sex twice and he told me he wants it again soon but he has a girlfriend. Sigh.

Thanks for sharing

What great story, love it. AAAAAA+++++

Cliched "partners die" bollocks.

To "Anonymous" from 8 months ago: "Partners die" is not a cliche. It is a trope. Virtually every fictional story of any length will have a trope of some kind. Longer works will have more than one.