All Comments on 'Oblivion'

Beautifully written, very good imagery and the action flows as if one can see the protagonists teasing under the sheets.

My favorite: "black eternity". My mind associates it with crashing over. That instant when time somehow dissipates.

That is one very brief but intense moment.

I can see myself there, either watching or feeling. It is a palpable emotion there and I have enjoyed reading it.

Thank you so much for sharing.

Well done... a very lovely interlude

I enjoyed the feelings brought through your words. I could gain a sense of the mood and excitement as I read it. Well done.