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All Comments on 'My Incubus'

by not_so_innocent_flirting

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not...all the way there...

Your syntax (grammar, sentence structure, etc) and the plot overall were things that could be worked on. It could've been better if you put a more thought into it...

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