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bigmud819about 9 years agostory is fine
I like the story, but poor English is distracting. Hope you get an editor before part 2.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoNeeds an editor
Spelling, typos, lots of errors to distract. And, we can tell it's just a fantasy as much of it is geometrically improbable.
Anonymousover 2 years agoBisexuals are super! It would be fantastic if there were more descriptions of people and actions!
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