by SissyAndi
Not a single original or clever thing in this mess. And I bet a 12 year old wrote the dialogue. Just horrible.
I'm loving where I'm hoping this story well end up with Her falling in love with Andie as Andy seems to have fallen in love with Tammy. Keep up the great story line and be sure to proof read. Checks instead of Cheeks. ; )
you were able to elicit the emotion of characters, and still keep it concise. this is a story most CD/TV can associate with and dream about. I hope it works out for all involved.