All Comments on 'Unexpected Visitor'

I like this a lot. Let's see some more.

... that I found. Other than that I liked your initial effort. The mistake did not detract from your tale at all. In fact, I appreciate your efforts and would like to read more of your writings.

The error occurs in the fourth paragraph's last line. I believe that "birds flying overheard" should be birds flying overhead. If I am wrong, I hope that you accept my apology.

Tall tree's and bushes don't often sheild you from your own drive.

Im usually not into the whole slapping around thing but that was really well done. Good job and keep writing!

Summer, skin, alone, caught. Very intense.