All Comments on 'Mom's Home Alone Ch. 01'

I like to read stories where someone is told to touch themselves. I just wish that your story were a tad more vivid. Like, have the onlooker make lewd comments about her nipples. For example: After she was told to touch her nipples how did she do it? Did she pinch her nipples, did they turn red did she feel her cunt juices run down her leg. If this happened the photographer can say Oooh yeah baby "click", your nipples are becoming as big and hard as pebbles as he cradled a tit in his hand. Your pussy is crying out to be fucked. He again reached out and fingered her pussy lips until she moaned. In other words, elaborate this picture so that the reader can feel sexual tension.

Smooth story flow told in an honest way. Many people feel just like Mom in the story begging to start a new life.

Great Read.

as erotic as this scene was by going along with his fast talk, Mom just opened herself to blackmail, and probably future sexual slavery with this kid as her Master as well. Exciting while it lasts, but not so much fun when it's time to pay the piper.

Still, it's a very good read, fast paced and exciting, taking advantage of a many people's of fantasies of playing either role.

nothing takes place in this world in a vaccum that is to say that there are regrets in everything we do .You should have your character in this story thinking about what she is enjoying and then say oh the hell with it im going to go for it because life is too short!