All Comments on 'Pretend'

keep the storys coming this was brilliant

One of the greatest stories on Literotica. I truly envy your nephew. Thanks for sharing this great tale with us.

i liked the story but it dwelled a little too much. I don't like children involved in stories either maybe the guy could have been of legal age

You had my imagination running wild. I could visualize my wife in the same situation with a teen age boy living with us briefly a few years ago.

Any more voyuer type stories in the future?

I'm a long fan of this story.

I've been reading your latest one, quite good in their own ways, but this one is by far the best (in my opinion).

Keep up this excellent work

This type of encounter happened to me and my wife once while I watched she got touched sucked and kissed for head to toe by freinds son, a barely legal teen. He eventually fucked her too as I watched from the closet. its a great story bringing back great memories

I don't normally like stories that involve "family" but this was a great story. Well told and with a great amount of suspense and lust. Now, I need to go take care of something...

Nice idea.

I first discovered this story back around '04, and no matter how many times I read it (dozens by now), it never gets old and never fails to get me off (maybe because blondes with big boobs REALLY turn me on; or maybe because your nephew sounds alot like myself). This is easily one of the top 10 stories on Literotica.

Your nephew is the second-luckiest fellow on the planet. You sir, getting to screw Betty, are the first! :)

Thanks for this excellent submission.

I've been reading this story 4 years ago ! And still Find it very good to read.

I'm missing your stories : why don't you post anymore !

Hope to read more soon.

Just superb! Thank you, Vetman!

A lovely, hot story that was perfectly believable for anyone who had risked being in such a situation. It never went too far but certainly brought out the 'wet' in this particular lady! It had genuinely made me want to chance the game again, but I'd better not read this to close beforehand - control would be far too difficult.

This little tale has just become my favourite of favourites - well done on every level.

I had a couple of aunts that I wanted to do this to. Needless to say, I pictured them in this story as I read it. Short, but to the point. Loved it.....

Okay she was awake and not that drunk and all that and it is a fantasy anyway but god I'd be afraid to have someone like that in my family. Like.... Let's imagine she had really been out of it...?

Great story live my wife to have a go like this. Can imaging her doing it, she likes to flash at other guys

I forgot to mark this a a favorite and then could not find it again. But, I did finally rediscover it. And, it still is fun to read. Wish I could find more stories like this. Great job.....

I first read this story years ago. It still excites me as much today as it did then. Hoping to get my wife to act this out with me and one of my friends.

Writing was very gripping.

John, I don't know if you still read these comments after all these years, but first off let me say that after 15 years of visiting this website, I can conclude that this is my favorite story I've ever read on here. Thanks for sharing it!

Artie's reserved personality sounds so much like my own when I was just out of HS--we might even be around the same age (born in the early '80s?)--and Betty's physical description sounds like my ideal woman: blonde hair, big tits, great body.

I have three nagging questions:

1) Since this story was published, has Artie ever visited you guys again and if so how did those visits go? Was Artie still eyeing Betty?

2) In the years since this incident did you & Betty ever discuss the possibility--even if it was only during your pillow talk--of her ever breaking her "no sex" rule just for Artie and having her seduce (and possibly deflower) him?

3) Have you ever thought about asking her to confess to Artie that she was actually awake that night and enjoyed the experience?

I would love an update!

Like one of the Anonymous commentors stated," that after 15 years of visiting this site, " I keep hoping you will pop up and write more ." This wish may never come true and I am fine with that, but you've got a great story telling down!

Your adventures with Betty are my favorite!

Exceptionally hot story! I really wish you could have let him go farther in exploring her body but still very hot story. Wife exposure stories are my most favorite!!

This was not only well written but it is I think a thing many have experienced, and set up. My Norwegian first generation American wife and i did this on numerous occasions. My wife is a 5'8" long legged strawberry blond, always the life of every party with both unequalled looks and out going personality. One of my coworkers once without knowing I was outside the break room called her a walking wet dream to a larger group who all re-affirmed. The first time it was by accident we had been drinking at a company awards party at a hotel. Late into the party I had deposited my very drunk 111 pound wife with the help of our friend I worked with into our room, after my buddy went into the adjoining room which he shared with another single coworker I stripped my wife down to her panties then left to rejoin the party. Later when I staggard back to our room it smelled of sex, uncovering my wife she was naked, her velvet strawberry pussy hair was matted with her lips open to a gaping still fresh creame pie. Whichever one of my coworkers that had come back after I left and fucked her was much larger than me as she was looser than she had ever been in our marriage. I for the lack of me was not angry but turned on more than the day her and I lost our virginity together in her grandmothers trailer 6 years earlier. I spent the most excited couple of hours of my life reclaiming her. The next morning my wife was very quiet and afar off staring at nothing, obviously in deep thought. While I was loading the car she asked why I had let Carl have sex with her, shocked I explained it as I knew what had now had happened. She told me she woke up when her head was banginging into the headboard of the bed while he was fucking her with a frenzy. She pretended to stay asleep, the next time she woke up I was fucking her. We knew my friend and coworker had a crush on my wife and always had found reasons to be at the house. Our sex life literally exploded after that in the next 4 week's we fucked several times a day and everywhere.. My wife and I had decided this was a gift HORSE since we were the ones with the secret that our friend partially knew that he also couldn't brag to anyone about. Every time I seen Carl I got hard watching him watch my wife thinking he was the luckiest man on the planet with the largest secret. It was then we set him up to once again be with his fantasy woman. Two weeks later again we arranged for him to be with my "passed out wife, soon he was in my wife all the time if not him us wanting to go party. We loved our new sex toy that was always as reliable as an ever ready battery. We are still friends today 10 years later. Fortunately for us he has never found the need to get married, and rarely dated much.

As soon as the writer states that this is a true story, you know they are lying. Just stop reading g and move along.

Loved it keep them coming. My husband and I used to role play. I am short only 5' and very pale skin I have red hair I am a full B cup with big hips. We were down at Cocca Beach for a week and got to know some of the people there real good. I away wear a old bathing suit I like it it feels good. We went to the beach time we got there and meet a older couple that lived down there. I put on my suntan so that I could get a sun tan. After a few mins I was getting real red we had been drinking all day and i forgot to keep putting sun tan oil on. My husband told our new friends that I was not a big drinker and that I will turn on very easy when I was drinking. His wife said I had better get something on that real soon. She said they had some cooling oil at their place across the street and she had to go make something to drink for them anyway so I went to with her. It was a nice home and she ran some water in her tub and told me to go set in it while she fixed the drinks. I was in the tub when I heard the door opening. I made out like I was asleep she came in and started rubbing something on me it was very cool to my hot skin. It feel so good that I did go asleep until I could feel her fingers going in me. I just let her have her way with me for about 5 mins. When I started moving she back away and ask me if I was cool down yet. She help me out of the tub and was toweling me off. We got back to the beach with the drinks and the men were happy to see us.

Loved the story

LOVE this story!

A rare 5 stars