by msnomer68
is, I guess why this tale though well told has not yet received comment.
It reminds me of the many deaths in an English amusement hall built largely of clear plastic with no easy way to see the exits.
If it saves one reader from not considering what would happen in a fire, it will have served it's purpose.
I read this story, your first published effort, on 23 September 2017. A masterpiece of describing down home Indiana. The eloquence of your descriptions was as flawless as a Hope Diamond; and the emotions evoked were a wonderful mixture of joy and sorrow for a time now lost!
Five Stars!
Once again, absolutely exquisite!