All Comments on 'Locked Out'

by argusx2002

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Choppy

The story itself was good, by your writing style could stand to be worked on. The sentences were rather choppy and didn't flow at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Just what I needed!

Great story, excellent build up, loved loved loved the end!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
And another marriage ....

bites the dust! Either Kevin kicks this stupid bitch to the curb or what else...another cuckie is born. lol until you puke!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

She wanted to fuck a black cock and she loved it

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