All Comments on 'Geek's Revenge Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A couple mistakes

In ch2 she calls brendan, David's little brother. It should be Steve's little brother.

Also in ch2 it reads that he is driving his mercedes, but elsewhere in this chapter he is driving a caddy.

Rad'lRad'lover 16 years ago
Good story, but -

it seriously needs editing and proofreading. A far cry from the well edited Ch. 01. Thanks, anyway.

ellyneiellyneialmost 16 years ago
Thank you

Building up, building up, wanna see what happens next, so I will. As soon as got the time. Thanks for this chapter too :)

PrincessJezebelPrincessJezebelabout 13 years ago
So funny!

I'm loving this! You're sense of humor is sick and depraved, in a really GOOD way. And strange to say, the story strikes me as pretty realistic, though none of the geeks I've had sex with have been quite so successful. But it's always nice to fuck a guy with a brain! Looking forward to the rest!

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
The Same As Chapter One

Still gets the high marks. Always nice to see the nerd get his revenge on the head cheerleader.

fanfarefanfarealmost 10 years ago
fizzled not sizzled

Hey, I tried but obviously this is a story for the perpetually adolescent to enjoy.

Buh-bye!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Was it a Mercedes or a Caddy? How about a Jag

tomkat7tomkat79 days ago

One of your best! I love this story and I'm reading it again.

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