All Comments on 'Closing Time'

HOTTT, VERY HOT

you got me soaked...... send more.....

. . . it was HOT! More classic cunnilingis from Milene.

I have not been a fan of lesbian sex, but you are convincing me!

Very very well done Mil, even from a gal who isnt that into feet. I love the passion that comes thru in your writing. Thankyou thankyou :D

I love the unique blend....it's a fabulous lesbian story!

Thanks, Milene. I love shoe store stories and the lesbian twist is a pleasant and very hot change. I could almost taste and smell the sex! Great stuff!

I'm a bi-woman and have occasionally wanted more than I get. Reading this story has set me afire and I'm in the mood for a willing female.

This story belongs in an art gallery.

I'm ready to work in that shoe store.

Need to find this shop and shop for new shoes. And yes, yet another reason to shop at closing time ;)

Loved the story. Only being there to see everything would be better then what your words decribed. xoxo from Canada

your writing skills are second only to your lovemaking. Please remember to write another story now and then. Grrrreat story.

I own a shoe boutique, catering to all women. I am 56, i always wear heels, nylons, look my best. Last week a woman, in her mid 60s came in.Dressed well,a bit plump, looking for dress shoes. i always lock the door giving each customer my time. I measured her foot, seductively touching her nyloned feet. I went and grabbed 5 pairs of shoes. Kneeling in front of her, i put them on,my hands carefully touching her nyloned legs, i got her to walk, i said they accentuate your figure, she looked at me, i said to really appreciate how good they do that i suggest you take your skirt off. She did, turning her around, see how they lift you here,my hands on her round bottom. Now lets try the next pair,she sat down, i lifted her leg,looking up to panties,i put the next ones on, i got her to stand, touching her thighs as i told her how tight they looked in those shoes. Lets try the next pair,higher heels, her bottom pushed out,my pussy damp, my hand stroked her bottom telling her how they lifted it, how sexy she looked. She sat down,i removed the shoes,lifting her leg,i glimpsed it, a damp patch on her undies, my hand ran along her thighs, i looked up at her, as my hand went higher,she didn't resist as my hand brushed her pantied pussy, lets try these,i put them on her, as she stood i knelt in front of her,adjusting the shoe, i smelled her pussy, my pussy wet, now is the time, i moved my hand up, my finger to her panties,i looked up at her, i pulled them down, my face looking now at her naked pussy, one flick of my tongue,she was wet, i licked once, twice, then stood ,led her to the chair, spread her legs and licked her pussy, moving up to her clit and without her saying anything except the sound of her moaning as i brought her to an orgasm, my finger in my pussy orgasming hard as she did. She bought the shoes. I get a lot of return custom.

A great story; all on one page!

Please, replace the word "gash"; there are so many words to describe it; that are more befitting your wonderful stories! I know men love it... Yuck.... Lol

I do love your writing tho ;)

L

So seductive

Outstanding erotica. Short, excellent banter, you pull all the strings...one of the better bits of girl-to-girl erotica I've ever read.

OMG I gotta go clean up babe lol xx

one of the sexiest ,hottest stories I've ever read

Well written as well, so much talent .

Need to go and get clean undies now!!

links to others like this please

Love it, such a fun reason to work late

Fun, erotic and sexy to read. Along with enjoy. Thank you so much for the night.

Well put together for a short story. I too am not a foot fetish person, but I love heels. I could easily see myself in the exact same scenario for beautiful feet that happen to belong to a beautiful woman.

Only a women , lesbian , can write like that..AAAA+++

I'm off to buy shoes, shall we say around 6:20 pm!

Sex sells? One satisfied customer, definitely satisfied ...... Expect the unexpected and the future is brightly lighted

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WHAT A STORY! This is as good as it gets.

Delicious . . .

I hit the jackpot with the toe sucking! Delicious. And this was only your first story? OMG.