All Comments on 'Mom's So Hot!'

The story seemed to drag in a few spots, making it much to long. The story could have been twice as hot if it was shorter and had more than just fucking in it. Where is the oral sex, anal sex? Absolutely none in this story, making it verge on boring? All the cum shots where in the pussy. Why not on the characters tits, in their mouth, or ass?

Overall, the fact that the story has no oral sex in it makes it dull. As well as the constant same old cum shots in the pussy, could have been twice as hot with those included.

The overuse of exclamation points really started to kill the story for me by the second page

i liked the realistic resistance that Mom showed, but she couldn't overcome the natural mutaul attraction. The story was a little repetitive as another user mentioned, and variety of positions would have added to the story for me. Missionary is exciting between mom and son, but variety is the spice of life.

I like this story a great deal ,especially the build up to the seduction of mom.I first read this on XNXX[which cannot be accessed by AOL,now]Glad to find it here.

Got me off by the time he penetrated her. FOund it realistic, fun, and exciting.

...when two people experience love as they have... the realization does take time to soak in...a Mother/son love is subconsciously the best/deepest in the world...and is intensified by the natural Mother/son connection...keep up the XXXcellent work...develop it with 69...blowjobs...anal...and have her hire a very massively hung black handyman/gardner/poolboy to develop her outer fringe fantasies...sort of introducing her to new levels/categories of love-making...in new directions...her figure already sounds XXXcellent...throw some measurements/cup size in too...along with her son's length/thickness...spice it up...the imagination runs wild...you can go any/every direction with this already well developed story...YOU GO FOR IT, MOM!!!XXX:) This is the sexiest lady yet, don't stop now, develop and expand her role/ride...I'm excited with additional ideas of my own...go for the brass/gold ring on her finger, replace it with his own...their secret...!!!XXXXXXXXXXXXX:)

Man it is the greatest story i read ever . hats off

This story read as if a horny fourteen year old boy wrote it. The overuse of exclamation points, as well as the "AAAAAAHHHHHHHMMMMMM" crap was very distracting.

By any chance did you run this tale by an editor?

That was an amazing story and was better without all the random anal sex etc. Definately realistic.

I like this kind of story, where the son has to convince his mom that they are meant to be together. I hope it works out for them.Thanks................Rich

your story is so unbelievably good,i found i could not stop reading till the last word

You're a great story teller and you have plenty of passion in the way you tell them but you need to do a LOT of work on your vocabulary. You misused a LOT of words. They were sound alike words but the wrong ones. That greatly diminishes an otherwise wonderful story. For example: semen and seaman are two entirely different animals. (there were many more) When you're using a word and you're not certain of its meaning go to http://www.merriam-webster.com/ and type it in to check and make sure that it's the one you want to use. I have that link on my desktop for exactly that purpose. I do it to avoid embarrassment.

Aside from the wrong word usage, the story was damned good.

You really bring out the passion, I would never, usually, read such a long story but I just could't stop reading this one until the very end, and I am headed right on to part 2.

Thank you and write more - anyone that does not become aroused reading this must be dying!

the first time i read this story i had a mind blowing release and it happens everytime i read it

uve a gift of building the tempo in a slow and seductive manner which is what i enjoy the added attraction is the mother's resistance in spite of her attraction to her son in fact i did read all the parts but nothing like the opening part especially when the son takes her for the first time the moment he penetrates the moment of sexual release wooooooooooooooooow definitely one of the best

Best story narration skill for the author. It kept me hot thinking about it.

This is the best I have ever read!!!!! It is so sexy!!! So Hot!!!!! The best part of the whole story is this Part 1!!!!

That was REALLY hot. I'm as hard as steel! The sex scenes are really good. As much as I dislike (generally) cheating spouses, I have to admit I'm cheering for them.

I hope they have a chance to really go at it. Some alone time and not worry about getting caught. Detailed writing is inviting.

this story is different from others because of the passion shown between Mom and Tom-nicely shown in the writing-the follow-ups should be good-thanks

it seems like you wrote the same story multiple times in one story. the sex scenes were all the same and it got boring. work on that

The sex was very hot but either their wailing and crying out was whispered and they were in the quietest bed on the planet or the father injured both his back and his hearing in that accident. It's going to be interesting to see how ff keeps the affair going now that the wife is home.

A very hot start to the series! I love reading long stories like this!!

Make a second part to this

dont bother with this story or you'll be disappointed when he turns his mom and everyone else in dog cat monkey fuckers

Mom is great-you are boring. No variation other than the same fucking over and over. No oral, no anal. Damn sorry for whoever you have sex with.

Totally agree. Boring lover and feel sorry for Mom with another dud lover. No oral? Seriously?

Stop reading here if you like anything about this first story. NO VARIATION, NO IMAGINATION And you do not stay true to the characters you set up.

My mom isn't afraid to let me know how she feels when we're fucking, and it makes our experience even hotter. Part of what makes it so exciting is that it's taboo, but when my mom's saying my name, and telling me to fuck her, it takes me to an even higher level. It also makes me want to let her know how much I enjoy her body, and being intimate with her. "Oh god mom, you feel so good, you're so much better than in my fantasies," I'll say to her. It always ends the same way eventually. We're both gasping like we're running a race as we are moaning, and calling each others names as our orgasms overtake us.

So after he gets back from the hospital, mom is working on supper and dad is watching the boob tube... Then at some point mom returns to fixing breakfast... And later (breaking up the kiss) the car door slams as dad (apparently) gets home...?

Exactly how long was this kissing going on anyway...?

And when exactly did the hospital call him...? Was that when he was kissing his mom or while in the bathroom or after her already left for the hospital again...?

I hope this kind of thing doesn't continue because it really negatively impacts my ability to enjoy a story when I see an author didn't even pay attention to what they were writing...

Please make an illustrated version for this great read...

Having Father in the story ruins the fantasy. Why have conflicted thoughts ? Make her a widow or single mother. She then finds a Man in her son. Gets bred and becomes his wife.

Very repetitious. A wonderful story line. There is no greater love than in a family and if it includes love making so much the better.

Your first story about your Grandmother was great. Maybe keep on the same track.

REgards

Beyond hot, sexy, lustful, incestuous, naughty! I can't wait to read more about this relationship. I really want him to get his mom pregnant.

One of the best mom son story ..

seman

A very yummy story! So hot and well written too! Thank you!

What a perfect story! I have been in love with my own mother since just before the birth of our second daughter ...and I’ve lusted for her all these years. I want so much to be Moms every day lover. I’m 49 now and Mom is 68. Please pray that I some day muster up the XX.

Very well written. Reminds me of my mom. We fucked for 40 years.

So good

The story was good and it was hot but could you possibly write a story without all of the dot dot dot dot's? Load your story into a text reader and I guarantee you you won't get by much of the story before you need to stop and edit all those fucking dots outta your story. Just constructive criticism! The story line I gave 5 star rating!

One helluva hot story. Incest be damned; this is pure lustful passion. Great job, Author!

"Thrusting myself into her, I finally felt the head of my cock thud up against her cervix at the same instant my belly touched hers. We were made for each other and fit together perfectly. Holding myself deep inside of her hot, sucking cunt, I bent down and quickly kissed her again." I do believe that sons and mothers have a unique "fit" just as do daughters and dads. It is quite amazing! And, that hot, sucking cunt that just throbs and clinches so tightly makes a man addicted to it. You can't get enough. That's one of the most intense stories.

Semen, not seaman!