All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Father Ch. 01'

This is erotica of a superlative level. Composition, gammer and word selectivity have been combined to create a moving emotional and imaginative experience. Thank you for a most satisfying experience.

Excellent! Very well done thank you.

this was writen as well, or better than most erotica that i have read!! i could actually picture the happenings!! again very very well done

Very well done story, excellent attention to pace and detail.........bravo.....

that was an awesome beginning

Now, to be honest it is not the most innovative or non-cliche story ever, but I think it is so well written that you can't stop. I have never took the trouble to comment even if I enjoyed the story. This is the first time I was compelled to comment. Thank you for writing such a good story. I haven't even read the rest of the chapters, and I love it already. I am sure the characters will become more compelling in the forthcoming chapters. Keep it up.

Probably the best story I have read in a very long time! Very well told; beautiful descriptions of not only actions, but also your alive emotions and detailed recall. Very impressive, not contrived. You have a real gift!