by angela146
would be my wishfulthinking.
and peace inthewOlRds!!!
Not hot at all... your voice sucked. Have some emotion... Less time using big words.. and more time getting into the story.
Very well done, and quite unique. Excellently executed stream-of-conciousness work, and one of the few peices here that could, in seriousness, be referred to as erotica instead of porn.