All Comments on 'Rainy Day Rubdown: Cindy's Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very good and very convinsing

And the erotic stuff was way hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Well done, as usual.

I enjoyed all 4 chapters and thought they were done well for a shifting POV story. My favorite was the first, but they are all very enjoyable. I didn't exactly buy the ending of Ch4 because so much had been skipped in the telling, but it wasn't anything that interfered with my enjoyment of the whole.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
all right, but...

The sudden rough coupling in the bookstore was not believable, and the sudden appearance of the husband's boss and wife at the shore was also too calculated.

kbone1kbone16 months ago

Statute is a law in governing. I think the word you are looking for is STATUE

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