All Comments on 'Latina Bitch'

by Phoenix Arrow

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great

We need more stories like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
very teasing

had fun with the style of the story, wouldn't have minded hearing more about Kalinas' service. Was fun though. Thankz

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
wow..... you're an undercover racist, huh?

I've read a few of your stories starting with "Wrong Number" which I thought was very interestingly written. However, those that I've read since that one, all seem to be somewhat racist. It's actually quite disturbing to see how you look at things and portray them with your words. Also, you may want to do a little proof-reading of your material, as well as spell-check before your future submissions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
It was good but...

The style of dialogue made it a little hard to follow. I think if it had been written a bit more like an actual story and less like a script, it would have been easier to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
good read

really good first chapter hope their will be more to come especially if there are mother and daughters coming in to it would love to read more soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Needed something to boost your poor ego? What a dumb fuck you are.

Disgusting dialogue.

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