by Clohi
I love storys about cowboys and this is by far the best that i have read.
Hot story! Outdoor sex with cowboy and cowgirl. Your sex scene on the boulder and by the tree were very sexy. Very arousing writing, you write very well, painting erotic stories and pictures easily. Keep writing!
I'm a HUGE fan of cowboys, so this story was the best ever! I've found stories on here that were okay, but I just LOVED yours! Not just the fact it was about a cowboy, either. Your writing skills are impressive, and I love your development on the plot line. You should come visit where I live, there's cowboys ALL over Texas!
great story. You captured the mood well. She must have been wearing flared jeans. I always have to take my boots off first, hehe. Keep writing.
Black or brown palominos don't exist. Palomino is a horse color that's light golden, so it can't be both palomino and black. The sex part's really good, though.
This was an amazing story... only one problem... there's no such thing as a black palomino... palomino is a color of horse not breed. Its a golden color with a lighter gold/white mane. But besides that this story was amazing!
i love this story the only thing that i saw wrong was that instead of calling it the horse a black palomino u should have called it a chocolate palomino. but other than that the story was amazing.
If I were to rank all the stories I've read on Literotica, this one would be tied for first. Is there a sequel coming? I hope, I hope! =]
Just so you know, a palomino is a color. It can be classified as a breed, but it's a color breed, the same way paints are. There are no black or brown palominos. Palominos are always some form of yellow (which can vary from almost white to deep golden) with a white/cream mane and tail.
What a fantastic story and so hot! You really did a fantastic job of describing everything that was going on, I felt every touch, kiss and stroke! That is the mark of a great story, excellent job!