All Comments on 'All Aboard?'

I loved the theme of the story and look forward to reading part 2. As a suggest though, before you post the story please check the spelling and grammer. This story has so many errors in it it makes reading very hard going.

Best of luck for the future stories

Glenn

Loved the prelude, possibly cos I am in love with the author! He is horny bugga and has a great way with words. Keep up the good work sweets!