All Comments on 'Shower Fun'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved it

One of the hottest watersports stories I've read. Always helps things when alcohol is involved too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
love your dirty fucking

this was such a turn-on. you really know how to write about toilet sex! i haven't had this kind of really dirty out-of-control sex since i've gotten knocked up. i'm showing this story to my bf and hope we can do much of the same nasty fucking in a few weeks - would love to have him nurse me and then piss on my face.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Watersports in its finest

Lovely writing, had me cumming before I reached the end of the story. Wow, a story to remember the next time I'm with my girlfriend.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
OMFG

This is absolutely the hottest peeplay story I have ever read (and I think I've read 'em all LOL)

First story I read from this author, now to go check out the rest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Fucking disgusting!!!! I loved it!

Now I gotta go clean up this mess... thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
hot! my wish

really nice!! your writing style is high quility. easy to read. my wish is to meet you sometime

Taylor_bTaylor_babout 15 years ago
Always love your stuff

I have read every one of your stories and love them all. It's funny how dirty stuff turns us on so. Love your pissing episodes and buttfucking into poo. I notice you haven't written for a while, love to read something new.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OMG

I wish i was her!!!!

Taylor_bTaylor_bover 13 years ago
Oh yeah!

I read this one over and over again.... always makes me horny. Scuse me, got to go to the bathroom for a piss and finger fuck.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Loved it

Mmmm, my kinda girl. I came before the end of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

very hot - but one thumb down for using the word 'dugs' to refer to breasts....

AlphaBeatHerAlphaBeatHerover 9 years ago
Excellent

A really good story. You included several of my favourite things and presented it al excellently. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
nasty pleasures

You definitely are not nice, Alicia! Great story - rough, nasty and hot. Piss porn is a big turn on for me and I really appreciated the filth of this . More piss stories please!

SummoreSummoreabout 3 years ago
Totally shocking

Loved this story and the way that you kept the reader engaged.

I have started to experiment with pee in my writings also although yet to experience much in real life, it is an area that fascinates me.

Summore

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demure in public and bad nasty slutty girl in private (btw, pic is not me but similar) I've written some stories, so please take time to read one http://bdsmtest.org/r/xLKKzJb9 https://dirtycode.io/HISCU