All Comments on 'Martha'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
HOT beyond HOT

I loved reading this.

generally I don't like it written from the

point of view of a man, but this was GREAT.

I want to marry a girl like Martha, love

the indented nipple, huge pussy lips, giant clit,

hairy bush, absolutely breath taking.

And I like that her face is a very pale skin that

has had skin problems.

God she sounds sooo hot, just the right woman for

me.

detectivebatman@yahoo.com

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
Odd ending

A better finale would have been Martha losing control and giving the lead a blow job on stage. Her getting fucked by Terry comes straight out of left field and is rather too downbeat after the preceding build-up.

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