All Comments on 'Weekend with Sis Ch. 03'

I tend to agree with earlier comments. What sort of a bloke would just get handjobs all the time, he could do that himself. Maybe Ann could do him in the morning after she comes into Shawna's room. There were a few minor grammatical / Typing mistakes. All in all a good story. Keep up the good work.

Either learn to write in English or submit your work to an editor first.