by charms75
Your story is well-written and has a nice warm touch at the end. You could have made the story "edgier" by making the policewoman more dominant sexually. She is, after all, bigger and stronger than he is. On the other hand, you could have made her more vulnerable by bringing out her personal conflict (need for sex vs. not wanting to be labeled a slut) earlier.
All in all, a good effort.
Having erotica with some real storyline is really good. Nicely done!