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Paris at Night

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by Anonymous07/15/04

Brava!!!

I really liked this story. I don't know whether it is truly a translation from a French original - but the effect of the use of the slightly halting English makes it so much more real. The narrator sounds like an acquaintance of mine - a purely platonic acquaintance, incidentally - a very attractive twenty something Frenchwoman - would sound if she were relating the same sequence of events to me The language found in most writing in this genre sounds just like writing - people don't talk that way - but this, for me, was different, and very impressive

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by Skol04/13/11

very sexy

Very sexy story. I loved the short descriptions of the scenes. And nice erotic climax. Will there be a sequel?

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