All Comments on 'Star Bound Ch. 1'

by Athena_e19

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
PHEWW ! ....umm...

...is it me, or did it just get real HOT in here ?

Well if a guy's destined for the "Domestic Service,"

you might as well go "big," right ?

Thanks "Athena," great 1st chapter...bring it on !

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years ago
Chapter 1

The first chapter seems to be a little rushed.

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