All Comments on 'A Tempting Vacation'

reall nice one

Thanks for your erotic story. It stirred some of my fantasies and will make for an interesting day.

Can't wait for the sequel

is there more in store?

Hot, hot, hot! 3 hot women, 1 young and hung guy- so many possibilities! Can't wait to read the next chapters!

You've done well in setting the tensions in this beginning story. It reminds me of a car trip with an old girlfriend's family. Her mum driving, little sister in front seat and the two of us teenagers in back with a rug for cover. Delicious!

As far as I'm concerned, this is without question the greatest story ever written, in the history of the universe. Would not change a thing. Please keep writing.

Thanks!

These stories are amazing, very creative. You are a fucking genius. Best erotica I've read by far--here or elsewhere. Idk how you've been able to keep the story going for so long and it still work, but you have.

Just an added thought as I start again ( many "agains" ) from the beginning . For episode 20 I'd love it if Pam, without any artificial stimulant , is totally overcome by her need for Ron , even though a taboo, & finally brings both of them to complete , as a beginning to a wholly new relationship, one that is compelling to both & fulfilling . A relationship that included Amy .

Great start, moving on to the next chapter! ;->

Good premise.

But pretty much all buildup.

Four stars.

Happy 20th anniversary!

Hats off to you. What a story! Last line of the last story filled me with hope that there is more to come. Once again, you are the best!!!