All Comments on 'Innocent Pawn Ch. 02'

I can't wait to read the next part! Love this story!

I can't wait for the next portion!! I loved it!

You are such an amazing writer. You should deffinitely consider turning this into a major novel corp.. your story is wonderful and passionate and it keeps you guessing. Nice twist at the end of chapter 3. Please keep writing the story. Hope to read the rest soon!

You have captured the moments between these two characters perfectly. I look forward to reading the rest of this story, and to see just where it takes me.

This story just keeps getting better,keep up the good please

tessia

Just keeps getting better and better!

you're a great writer

i keep waiting for the part where it seems less like rape and more like reluctance, but no, this is still kidnapping and rape to me, and he is just as much a jerk as wen this story started...

I've had a secret fantasy of being kidnapped and taken by a some handsome guy with a hard cock.....this made me cum over and over....mmmmmmm i love it

Seems very similar to "The Taking Of Lena" to me. Practically copied.

Erm, this was written in 2003, The Taking Of Lena was written in In the last two years. How can this be a copy if it was written first?