by WisdomousOne
It is a generally good story, very erotic, just needs a little more depth more immagination, but not necceasarly anything like bdsm. When love and sex are involved bdsm shouldn't be.
VERY HOT STORY. HAVE HEATHER GET DRESSED UP FOR DADDY IN HIGH HEELS, BLACK SEAMED STOCKINGS, A GARTER BELT, PLEATED MINI SKIRT AND A SILKY SEE THROUGH BLOUSE.
Time for Heather to try Anal sex.... and maybe one of daddy's friends.... for double penetration...
I really liked your story ... as far as bdsm and love are concerned .. in my ever humble opinion .. the two should mix as often as possible.. nothing greater then seeing the love of two people expand into something more
I loved the story I don't know what it is about the subject of incest and father daughter sex but this story had me painfully hard all the way through. I think that something that would be nice to read about though is if Heather should wind up getting pregnant and giving her daddy a set of twin daughters.
I can't wait to read the next several parts. I am so hard!
Ugh, another damned writer that wants to write about virgins and has NO FUCKING IDEA where the hymen is located and is TOO LAZY to take the THREE MINUTES it would take to research it on the very same web that this story is posted on.
Holy FUCK I have read and cum to this series at least a dozen times!! Thank you for the amazing mental images that get me off so good. What a perfect daughter. I'm not much for the forceful gaging but still everything about the story is perfect. I'm Bi so I keep thinking how amazing it would be if Heather had a brother that daddy could fuck around with too. Now to read more and cum so hard!