All Comments on 'Innocent Pawn Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Lovin' every minute of it...

I love the way your story is developing. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Love the story!

I sincerely hope you continue this. Hot, hot stuff!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Excelent!

You discribe everything in such wonderful detail! It has a good plot so far wich many storys are missing. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Please continue with this story

Please continue with this story...it's very tastefully done. I read many erotic stories and I think your work is one of the best that I have ever encountered. It's very descriptive and erotic in an elegant way. Please continue with part 4, part 5 and so on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Keep it coming!

Love the story--please continue. The romantic in me is hoping that it turns out to be a love story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Great Story!!!

Keep the story coming...can't wait for the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
gr8

continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Give me more!

I love this story. I love the way you write. Please, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Can't wait for the next installment!

I love this story line. I check for continuations periodically, whenever I am on the site. Anyway, please continue. And I look forward to reading to the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Please continue!

Great story, I definitely hope you continue it! I'll be back to check for more!

Sir_NathanSir_Nathanalmost 20 years ago
Bookmarked!

...and added to the list of favourite Authors on my profile. smiles

You are a wonderful writer of sex scenes. I am looking forward to reading all of your stories.

Very hot!

oh and ps. please continue :-) If chapter 8 is as good as this, then I am really looking forward to it.

Inspiring stuff!

fyrekittynfyrekittynover 18 years ago
WONDERFUL!

Better and better and better!

hotqueenof.fantasieshotqueenof.fantasiesover 18 years ago
GREAT

I still like your story, each chapter is better !

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69over 16 years ago
Sweet J...

You are talented! WOw! This story is amazing! On to read more.

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 12 years ago
Second time through this prime example of erotic romance

Love this and all the rest of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I love this story

Even though I wonder how ‘her small hand fluttered hesitantly in the air before coming to rest flat against his chest,’ while her arms were bound behind her back?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
!!!

Lovee it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Ew.

Fuck, I hope his boots don't have anything nasty on them. 'Cause if he's trekked through someplace disgusting...he probably just gave her an STD, which he will then get himself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I love it!!! Thank you for this great story

TheNaughtyGirlTheNaughtyGirlover 2 years ago

Loving this story so far!!!!!!!

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