All Comments on 'Away for the Weekend'

I liked it. You tell a good story in a manner that maintains the excitement. All that is very good. The one area which needs improvement is word selection and proofreading. There were a few instances where you used one spelling of a word when you needed to use another: example to, too, two. There were also a few times where careful proofreading would have prevented wrong tense application.

Over all a very good effort. I wish they had a 4.5 category.

this story is unrealistic, wife has no guilt bout screwing around, doesnt even tell us why, other than she had been with no one, i just found story boring

Very sexy. Don't worry about some asshole who complains of lack of plot. This is just a dirty story and needs no plot. The only quibbles I would make is that he should have used a condom in the woman's ass and I would agree with the second PC there could have been better editing.

Did I really write this?!

I want you. I love your mind.

I thought this story was interesting. I can see the pure passion of having a sex romp with someone without having responsibility. It is pure id play.

On the other hand, my wife was screwing around on me and broke up our family. Now I have two children that will grow up in a broken home, just like their mother.

I'm sure that there are people who get turned on by things that lie beyond the normal plane of behaviour, and I'm okay with that. I get turned on my them too. Stories that are completely moral are probably boring; breaking taboos is exciting.

I chose to read one of your "not yet hot" stories, and gave you a four, excuse my honesty, and I'd have preferred to give a 4.25, but damn there is no option! Its a solid story, Honey. Porn need only be sex, not necessarily with a huge plot and history and all that crap. You have an incredible imagination, and you create a vividly realistic milieu here, which I enjoyed immensely. A few tense things, as well as added description on a couple of others and this story would go from good to amazing in my opinion, and I know you are capable of amazing! I saw a thread with you and Summer Morning, and your addition was incredible.

Excellent job of writing. exciting from start to finish. you feel her anticipation and arousal and share it with her. nicely done.

thank you.

story over and over. Honey, I can't get enough of this one! It is so smokin' hot...so what if she's cheating? Are we all so moral on here that we can't enjoy the pure unbridled lust that you've displayed in these two? Hey, if I'm ever Away for the Weekend, I want it to be with a woman like this!

Which this one was...never mind lack of plot! Hotter than hell, and I look forward to reading more!

This story has one of the things that turns me on in an instant...a woman rimming a man! Thanks for that! The rest of the story was completly hot as well... made me think of cheating too... with my superfine hubby!

She is not shay of writing any new things. The house wife having a very sharp perception towards his hidden needs, not hesitant to do anything not normal like fingering licking him. I wish to meet a woman like her.

I want this woman...

You can have me anytime! WOW! Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

So vivid i could almost picture you in bed next to me on a hot summer night atop soft white linen sheets with a slight breeze drifting across us while locked in a sultry wet kiss, stroking each other in just the right places...........

This story should have an "H" next to it, Honey! A mutual friend told me about you, and I see you haven't written anything in a while. I hope that's not permanent.

Decent writing though the author's prose feels disconnected, the sentences don't flow together to make interesting paragraphs.

It's a stroke story and the sex scenes are reasonably well-done. Insofar as the more conventional elements of fiction are concerned, it has no plot, no character development, no central conflict, and thus no resolution. We don't know who she is nor who he is and we certainly do not care what happens to them.

I know a story is good when I feel compelled to read something else by that author. Didn't happen.

Excellent fiction this is not. This 50's for you, Honey123, for a story that's tolerable.

I read this with some of my own preconceptions. Parts rang true. It's a nice idea, very nice

Finger licking good tail, honey

How'd I miss this story?! Great stuff, sweetie! Loved the passion she was feeling!!

Wow I'm sitting here shaking and my cunt is dripping. I loved it!!

I liked the story very much until he took her in the ass.

I only did that to one woman and then only once. She sure didn't like it and neither did I. I am strictly a Pussy man, both fucking and eating. Call me old fashioned if you will.

I had this same fantasy with a lady a while back, very reminiscent.

Ty.

Loved the story!

You definitely have a talent for writing erotic stories. This one sounds like it may have been an actual occurance... was it?? Thanks, Ace

Very hot story!

I follow your "What's Covering Your Ass" thread and clicked on your honeypot link for grins today. Wow. I like to paint word pictures with my writing too but yours is amazing. Erotic, graphic and leaving me wanting more. The sign of a good erotic writer to me is one that gets me worked up and aroused. I want you to know that I have a nice wet spot on the inside of my slacks now because of you! Thanks!

This was hot, but it would have been hotter had the lead not been a cheating whore. I can only hope hubby isn't clueless and sends her packing.

"Ah, fuck! He groans. I want to cum on you!"

Just speaking for myself, a man, it's about "I want to cum IN you", not on you - otherwise I might as well be just jerking off (but this is not video).

While we're commenting, we don't "lay on a bed", we lie on it (unless we lay her down in order to say, fuck her, or lay down some bills in order to pay her).

I'm not a huge fan of anal stories, because most of them give the impression that they've never done it. There is no subtlety, no caring. This one was brief, but had just enough to show that she was experienced, and that he cared. Vintage, but nice!