All Comments on 'Valerie Moves Home'

by HoHos

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tinman69stinman69sover 20 years ago
keep up the good work

I love a good incest story! And this one is pretty darned hottt! It just needs to be finished with daddy doing his daughter really good while mom watched and then the had a threesome!! Work on that. Love it !!!

Big_MacBig_Macover 20 years ago
Story incomplete

Your story was very good - as far as it went. Now that the session with mother is complete and father is calling. We have read the first chapter. The next chapter should have the action with the father. Chapter three is a full fledged three way fuck fest

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
love love love it

don't wait. submit again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
jeez, that was so hot.

i really can't wait for another part. seriously, u have to make it. i NEED it bad.that was an awesome lesbian experience, kudos for that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
i came all over the keyboard

great...but it should be longer...i wanna fuck both of them

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Excellent!

I have read and reread this piece over and over again. Great descriptions and quite torrid. I loved it! I am looking forward to your next addition. I would really like to see more between mom and daughter. Love the size differences and comparisons. Great story - please write more involving these two hot ladies.

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