All Comments on 'Un- minded one'

nigh, quietens, aflutter, Nary, lil ? Come on, You lessen your work with unnecessary and out of character flourishes.

I agree with the comment below. It points to a symptom of the problem of this poem--this poem has nothing really interesting to say (hence it attempts to make up for it by verbiage).

Regards,

Senna Jawa

I loved it and believe its one of the best poems

I thought this was fun-- isn't that what this is about anyway? I enjoyed myself reading this poem.

outrageously sensual imagery