by Sabledrake
Well written with a nice twist. More interesting than most. A nice sick mind --I like that--
one of the best stories ever posted on this site, without a doubt. Absolutely amazing in realistic detail and in plot.
Oh me, oh my! That was both hot and creepy in such an intertwined way that I'm not really sure I should enjoy it so much... but yeah. I'm torn between thinking Kyle is a right bastard, which he is, and thinking what a clever puss he is. Poor Joanna. One, her daughter is safe and sound and her rat bastard husband is out of their lives (supposedly) but two she's at home with a very horny and amoral son.
I'd like to see what happens next, as it's rife with possibility.
High quality writing, as is your norm. Gorgeous descriptive work, and a plot to make one's moral compass do tight heliocopter spins. Inventive. yow!
Mooncat
Appreciate the feedback, folks! I just submitted my latest story, which is called "Swallowed." Look for it in the Erotic Horror category in a few days ;)
Sabledrake
Sherlock Homes had 3 pipe problems. That wonderful, erotic, meltingly multiple orgasm making family story was a 3 pantie story for me.
Your descriptive powers are awesome. The plot cleverly twisted this way and that. Is there a vacant room in that house --- me me me for lodger.
Oh, by the way, I loved it !!!!!
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But I kinda guessed something like that. Sexy story anyway.
Is Momm worried what Kyle will do to her, with her? Or just ashamed of the resulting circumstances????
That was so great, kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time and I loved the twists and turns. Definately made me wet!
im still shivering with excitement, nice twists, glad i took time to read it, in fact, i might just have to start at the beginning and read it over again, hehe
on this story, a slow starter, but im so glad i kept reading. thanx for the trip and i like the twist you through in there. kinda felt abrupt, but it was good none the less.
Who knew your little boy would grow up to be such a huge prick (literally)? What a twisty little story you conjured. Mom the investigator becomes the eventual victim(?). Who'd uh thunk it? Well...Sable did! Good one.
I think the title of my comment says it all.. at the end of the story I sat here with my mouth hanging open.. and then I laughed... I am not usually taken by surprise good job. The story was a little long winded but very hot.. would love to read more.
... what a turnabout ! talk about the best laid plans. GREAT story !!
My fucking gawd. THIS IS MY DREAM STORY. its spot on to what I love! I came soo many times and I think im about to read the story again ;D hehe. Btw, (By The Way) can u pls write some more? Cause this is fucking unreal.
-Catherine
OH MY GOD! THIS WAS THE MOST FUNNEST STORY TO READ, THERE WERE SO MANY TWISTS AND TURNS LOL GREAT GREAT JOB!!! :)
Yeah, you're an interesting writer, very competent, and well versed. I had read this story a long while ago, and came upon it again not remembering I'd read it. It was as good the second time as it was the first. Yeah sure I remembered reading it after the part where she and Dani decided to change places, but I was hooked by then and didn't want to stop reading. I've read several other of your works, you tell a good story with a deceptively quick ability to turn it around and back again. I'm sure you are writing for a living, you are just to good not to.
I have only read from your incest stories, but I think now I'll read a bit of your other stories.
Make sure you replace all the names next time. You missed changing "Kevin" to "Kyle" in all cases.
I actually started wanting to know what happens...damn guess we know where the real incest took place.
That was great. It kept building to a great climax ( LOL pardon the pun ) and I'd love to see what happens between Kyle and his Mum.
Incest isn't my thing, but it was a pleasure to read something so well-written.
This is so sick and twisted and I'm disgusted but not in a good way but.... I do have to give you props this keep me on the edge of my seat. I have to remember I've read sicker stories.
Joanna is the biggest bitch in the family. It became a freak show because of her. The bastard Rich did what he did because of the stupid bitch Joanna