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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
vertiginous vertices of quartz feldspar mica?

"vertiginous vertices

of quartz feldspar mica"

I would not have thought such phrasing would work, but in your hands they surely do, Marvelous!

Later on in the poem it appears you have caught the dreaded "Fish disease". I only beg you, please wear a mask should you go anywhere near S.J. :)

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