All Comments on 'Locker Room Lust'

lame.. i couldn't read more than 2 paragraphs. This isn't erotic at all it's sweat fetish crap. buy a thesaurus.

This isn't erotic at all it's sweat fetish I SAY THIS IS so uncool

Totally, non-erotic.

sorry, it's the only thing I could think of.....hehehehe, this is soooooooooo BAD!!!! I didn't even give you a one! hehehehehe

Well I thought it was HOT!!!

I loved it and wish you would write more of the same!!

Maybe have the rest of the class fuck his ass when they catch him sniffing their straps.

This story could've been really hot. But all the spelling mistakes and the totally preposterous story really rubbed me the wrong way. I don't think you need a thesaurus, I think you need a dictionary. A lot of people get off on sweat, but I really wonder if anyone has ever referred to their asshole as "man pussy". That's just plain silly.

I'm all for sweaty guys... but really. "Dick juice?" Is that anything like orange juice? Like the last totally hilarious poster pointed out, we need to take up a collection to buy this boy a dictionary.

Please don't post such crap, again. Spend more time. Do some work, don't just send in your first rough draft.

...bad!! This isn't a turn-on! It's a turn-off! God! It's just so distasteful! An extra minus for the spelling, man.

wow i thought i was just posting a story of me fucking my buddy

i did not know i was in english class all over again.

personally i could give a fuck about the spelling or grammar or what ever.

i just wrote about my first sexual expierence with another guy and wrote about what i like. i like my sex sweaty and i love the smell of sweaty balls.

i am not into that fem shit cause thats why we have girls

This was a sad story!! The plot was in NO way erotic, but your spelling errors made me feel sorry for you. At least copy and paste this "story" into word...so it will catch your mistakes. There were many other problems other than what I have already mentioned, but I do not feel like writing a story on how you could have done a better job!

Who cares about spelling, I thought it was a hot story. I would like to be fucked by a sweaty jock in a locker room full of sweaty jocks. The smells would be heavenly. And I do think you should have more join in next time. A gang bang! NICE!!!!!!!!

It could have been alot better if you calmed down and took alittle more time to write. If you happen to spend alot of time on this story, never write a story for literotica again. You used to many discriptive words at times you didnt need to. This is an EROTIC sight, hearing about real things that really happen during what is supose to be an erotic time, ruins everything.

This could have been a good story, but I think the wording was weak. It failed to give me an erection that I ever so much count on when reading a good piece of erotica. The story was ok, but you left little to the imagination, and what details you did put in failed to arouse me. However I will read anything else you may write and hope for better.

I really liked the whole plot. I wish that would happen to me! The sweaty jock and rimming! YUM

Comeon guys the story was ok... the grammer was terrible, the vocab used was wrong but it was a good plot... a little more work would have made this story very appealing.. keep working at it

I Liked the Story Because I really Like Smells like he talked about.

Ass Crotch Balls Pits.. Love Those Man Smells..

And Yeah Would love to of Had a First like that..

im currently in high school there is a guy that i look at all the time. i wish this would happen to me

Don't listen to those other guys!! The hell with the spelling and the grammar! That was one hot ass story and it made me think back to my past sexual experiences with guys and how hot and erotic they were. I totally enjoyed reading the story and these guys need to understand and remember that when you're having a hot and erotic sexual encounter and giving it a storyline, sometimes you get so caught up in remembering the encounter that you sometimes forget to be precise about such things as spelling and grammar. You're just into telling the story!! So guys, just lighten up and enjoy the story and try to be a little less critical!! Just let go and enjoy!!

Talking about a fantasy? How can one get so lucky. To be taken like that? There is nothing I could want more...

This is exactly how me and Bobsta met after soccer I was in the showers and suddenly felt the 13 inch long sausage pounding my tight virgin butt. Ever since after matches I suck and lick his meat and nipples and butt crack then he gives me it hard and direct in my butt

By the way in august I'm on my own for 4 weeks if u want some fun gimme your number 18- 25 only must be big and white only. trannies are more than welcome I might even dress up myself

Cum on you soon

Xxx

got me so horny. thank you!

I'm jacking off to this story and fingering my sweaty ass. Wanna lick And sniff my fingers?

NEED TO WORK ON YOUR SPELLING

i hate god damn gays. you all need to move out of America!!!

i wish that happened to me ;3 fuck me please!!??

Wow!!! What a hot story, I could almost smell that sweaty old jock! Hog Heaven!!!

Sweat, come and a couple of piss drops make smelly dick and balls turn into a life treasure.

Congratulations. A fantastic story.

2 young hot scots guys we love 2 swap sweaty pissed cumstained underwear with other hot guys does not have 2 be jocks as long as we can smell the sweat and cum cumstainlover@live.co.uk we can swap pics and underwear j and d

Hot story man got me hard dream come true ey?

And to the guy who hates gays ahahah I hope ur scarred for life after this story

allow the readers mind 2 fill in some of the blanks, DO NOT DESCRIBE EVERYTHING

This story was really hot... I wished that had happened to me in highschool

Stop the shit. This is no grammar class. It´s about men's sexy sweat and ur story is great. Keep on writing about it and you'll have me 'nd thousands more beating our meats and wishing to be sniffing and tonguing sweaty hairy man legs which is the only place in the whole world where you can find these real macho smells and hot cheese.

This story is more true to life then you realize. This was me in high school and now as a high school coach, I watch and catch my players doing the same thing. It is to dam hot.

I just die for smelling an' sucking a macho's hot smelly cock an' hairy balls. Licking a man's sweaty armpits and feet also makes me horny. Anyone here looking for a good dirtycock sucker?

This story is so damn hot that i cummed while reading it. There is a guy at my school, his name is brice and i really wanna smell his sweaty balls and ass. Then I wanna give him a blowjob so hard that hel turn gay. God why do the hot guys have to be straight.

theres somethin abt the smell of a lads bush &/or bollox that drives me crazy ! even my own smells gr8 . but i cld.nt/wld.nt ever smell a lads crack tho . urgh ! fuck that . why wld any1 wanna smell where shit comes out of ? :o/ but i guess every1 2 their own thing . but 4 me . it.s DEFFO bush sweat & bollox sweat . HOT !!!!!!!!!! i.m wankin off as i type . lol :P

my current fuck buddy is active military. i met him at the gym. i told him how much i love sweaty jocks so he's been wearing the same one all week while he worksout and runs getting it ripe for me, he's gonna pound my ass sun nite while i sniff it

I almost came while reading this. I am so in love with anything gay with a man. I am currently waiting for my man to come home from work. I am going to swallow his dick whole!

Sweaty, ball smells, arse sweats piss drips and cummy cocks in a pair of well worn pants/underwear. Unwashed but carefully wiped butt cracks, cocks, balls and pussy. I just love dirty smelly, lick each other clean sex. X

I love to lick my man's cock after he fucks me . He loves to clean my asshole with his mouth. We do it every time we fuck. The taste is awesome.

You described this scene and I know that several guys like to do it too.

Cogratulations.

That was great,

Man I loved that story. I could imagine myself being there with ya'll. The only thing that could've made this story any better is foot play. I love everything about feet! From the smell, to the feel, to the taste, To the look of them running up & down my big 8 inch circumsized cock. Great story & please keep them cummin'. My # is (270)434-2356. Please call anytime. Id love to worship & tickle your big, soft, stinky feet & toes! Lots of Love, Josh Gentry

wow that was so hot i was rocking hard

wow i cummed so hard to this

I like stories of the sweaty male crotch, hairy low hanging sweaty balls, the masculine musk they give off and the male pheromones trapped in the pubic hair after a good workout. The scent of a mans balls with fresh cum running down them, just waiting to be cleaned off with my tongue as the low hangers are lowered onto my nose and mouth. The male bulge in a white jockstrap or white briefs framed by a nice pair of muscular hairy thighs waiting to squeeze your head between them as you kneel to get your face into the swelling manhood there waiting to be worshiped. The display of total masculinity before as you inhale the heavenly scent goes straight to your cock as you get that oh so fragrant scent causing your own cock to stiffen. The anticipation of getting into the perfect package being presented for both your pleasure...love jerking one out thinking of my other married male friends allowing access to their forbidden fruit, enhanced by the scent of my own sweaty underwear as I fantasize it's their scent I'm inhaling! This always gets me off quickly.

Another amateur writer who does not proof read their material or just does not know how to spell or construct sentences properly.