by RazzRajen
I read this one, I rad this twice. The message and heart of this particular poem does not seem to communicate with me. Still I read it again. Why? Because the sheer thrill of such perfectly carved lines, the elegans and grace in which you use words.
Elegance and artistry just radiated from this piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I keep coming back to this one. I have been reading your poems for a while now, and I finally decided I would leave you a little comment about this one, because it was just that potent.
Sadness wafts through from both sides in the relationship
As neither is fulfilled.