All Comments on 'Breached, yet again'

by RazzRajen

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IcingsugarIcingsugarover 20 years ago
SHeer thrill

I read this one, I rad this twice. The message and heart of this particular poem does not seem to communicate with me. Still I read it again. Why? Because the sheer thrill of such perfectly carved lines, the elegans and grace in which you use words.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Lovely.

Elegance and artistry just radiated from this piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
keep coming back

I keep coming back to this one. I have been reading your poems for a while now, and I finally decided I would leave you a little comment about this one, because it was just that potent.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Sadness wafts through from both sides in the relationship

As neither is fulfilled.

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