All Comments on 'A Tempting Vacation Ch. 04'

This is a wonderful story. I keep watching the site for more of this story. I am addictated to this one. Keep it cumming.

Great story, give us more! You damn tease!

Great story. Enjoy your writing style. Building up toward more intimate encounters, level by level.

I'm glad to see a much better effort than chapter 3. This chapter was almost as exciting as chapter 1. This is one of the better stories on the site, if Ron ever does have sex with one of the ladies it will be one of the best stories on the site.

Another great chapter in the story! I can't wait to see where the story heads next. Don't keep us waiting too long!!!

One of the best stories I've read recently. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work

After reading Chapter 1, I was a bit disapointed with number 2 and a bit encouraged with number 3. But oh boy did you ever come out swinging in number 4. It is as good if not better than the first one.

Great work and keep it comming.

What an incredible imagination! Even on my most twisted days I can't compare to JackKing, or write even half as well. What a treat it is to have him here with us on Literotica.

.... i'm still laughting about that incredible situation !!!!

Great story so far !

Keep writing ;)

Thanks for posting

A great piece of writing from the different characters' perspectives.

Oh to be young and permanently randy again!